After reading some of the other about me and descriptions I have found a few things that I would like to change. In my about me, I still like that it is focused on my connection to the topic and builds my credibility but it could be a little less resume like. I would still like to include the information that shows I know what I'm talking about, but maybe do it in a less formal way. I do joke a bit in the draft, but there are parts where it still sounds like an answer to a job interview question. I would also like to add a picture, I feel that its easier to connect with someone that you have an image of.
As for the blog description draft, I like the basic formula for mine, but I just think that I should shorten it a bit. Some of the others in this class had very short to the point blog descriptions and I think that felt effective to me. Someone doesn't want to read a whole paragraph to decide if they want to stay. So I would like to keep the direct, and informal approach in my draft, but shorten it at least a little bit.
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