The blog description that I liked the most is from Cristina Maria Special Events, Everything Events Blog.
"My blog is for those planning their events and for those who like to attend events. Whether your event is big (weddings, bar/bat mitzvah, anniversary parties, milestone birthdays, etc.) or small (dinner parties, cocktail affairs, etc.) we have something for you.
Come visit my blog for "everything events!" Need tips on how to save on your wedding? Want to know what DC-area galas, festivals, fundraisers are going on? Want to find out about Trunk shows, Bridal shows, Mitzvah shows, Expos, and Venue Open Houses? Need tips on planning your dinner party? Need a Diamond Ring Shopping 101? Want to learn about different DC-area vendors and venues? Recently engaged and need advice on how to get started? Want to get ideas from some Cristina Maria weddings and events? Want to view some inspirational pictures of our favorites things to possibly spark an idea for your event theme? You have come to the right place.
Come and visit often!"
What I think the strengths of this description are is that it is purpose drive, explaining what it hopes the reader will gain from it, as well as being personal, addressing the reader directly.
My draft:
Hello! This blog is designed for those of you like me, who oddly enough, love planning things! Anything from concerts, to weddings, parties, and fundraisers have some of the same key elements, and are just as fun to create. The blog will be geared to newbies hoping to learn some tips or experienced event planners looking to brush up on the theory. Events and Everyday Catostrophes will use my experiences planning the University of Rhode Island Senior sendoff as well as working in the Programming Office of the university to provide (hopefully) entertaining anecdotes to help connect with skills and ideas to help you run your own events.
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ReplyDeleteI like it...detail but simple.
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ReplyDeleteYeah!! So simple
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